The pacing in the train of thought narration is painfully accurate for what's happening.There's some stories that just can't be told clinically. I've chewed over this piece for a while. Trash Angel hits closer than I care to elaborate on here. I find my own hopes and flaws and attempts to cover up those flaws in the pages. Or something similar to them.
As much as I fear this story, I'm glad to have read it. Removing rotten flesh is still a form of catharsis.
The style of narration here feels so dry and rotten in a good way, truly like the mind of someone like Bishop. Kind of like tumbling rocks. I enjoyed your descriptions a lot, you really know how to paint a horrible picture and make me feel like shit reading it.
Again, in a good way. This was raw and heart-wrenching and I loved it. The descriptions of the state of the angel girl made me wince every time.
thank you so much!! this made my day it means a lot to me that u liked it, your game was amazing! i'm really glad this story hit in the visceral pained way i was hoping ♡
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Disturbing. Depressing. Disgusting. I loved it.
The pacing in the train of thought narration is painfully accurate for what's happening.There's some stories that just can't be told clinically. I've chewed over this piece for a while. Trash Angel hits closer than I care to elaborate on here. I find my own hopes and flaws and attempts to cover up those flaws in the pages. Or something similar to them.
As much as I fear this story, I'm glad to have read it. Removing rotten flesh is still a form of catharsis.
oh my god.
The style of narration here feels so dry and rotten in a good way, truly like the mind of someone like Bishop. Kind of like tumbling rocks. I enjoyed your descriptions a lot, you really know how to paint a horrible picture and make me feel like shit reading it.
Again, in a good way. This was raw and heart-wrenching and I loved it. The descriptions of the state of the angel girl made me wince every time.
Great work!
thank you so much!! this made my day it means a lot to me that u liked it, your game was amazing! i'm really glad this story hit in the visceral pained way i was hoping ♡